Wednesday, June 4, 2008

From Research to Paragraph

I am Layla.
I am the Queen's Loyal Slave
I wish I had...
Beautiful makeup
(as does my Queen)
beautiful jewellery
(as does my Queen)
beautiful linen.
(as does my Queen)
Beautiful Egyptians.
Protect our eyes with eyeliner
Protect our shave heads with wigs
Protect our bodies with linen
We protect but sometimes forget little feet
Rich red lips
my poor bare burned ones
I wish I could have some ochre
Golden jewellery
my poor bare neck
I wish I had
what she has
But I w a t c h her beauty,
I h
o
p
e she knows
how happy I am to be
able to help her
look that beautiful.
I am Layla.
I am the Queen's loyal slave.

4 comments:

huss kass said...

this type of a poem was much more complicated than i t hought

AH said...

I'LL ADMIT THAT THESE
KIND OF POEM ARE REALLY COMPLICATED BUT IF YOU KEEP TRYING AND GET USED TO IT,IT'S JUST A SNAP OF A FINGER!!

AH said...

ill admit that this kind of poem is complicated but,once you try it,
its easy.

AK said...

My name is Augustus Ceaser,
the emperor of Rome.
We stole properties of
different civiliasations.
We are proud,we want to show
power,
to own more land and
to enslave people.
Swords and shields are my
symbols.
I provide entertainment for
my people.
My name is Augustus Caeser,
the emperor of Rome